Assignment 17A Elevator Pitch No. 2

Assignment 17A Elevator Pitch No. 2

https://youtu.be/k5wNWoU-X4I

Reflection on the feedback I received from my last pitch. 

My first elevator pitch took me a long time to record because I felt so awkward doing a video of myself.  I must have recorded it 25 times.  I received some positive feedback from my peers.  However, one of my peers brought up a great point.  Many people like their tattoos and she is absolutely correct.  These individuals would not fit my market segment and therefore would not be a customer for my product.  I also received other feedback that was quite helpful.  Suggestions like zooming in because I was too far away and the need for less distraction were part of the feedback. I chose to do my pitch outside and there was noise in the background which caused distractions.  Some other items I could have done a better job with was clarifying was my market, adding more about the solution, and talking about the service which were recommendations I thought were most insightful and I wanted to use them in my next elevator pitch. 

What did I change based on feedback?

I changed several things in my elevator pitch based on the feedback I received.  First of all, I chose to do my pitch inside and zoomed in which made the sound and video quality better and I felt I my message was better conveyed. Next, I included more about my market segment and added more about the solution by describing the service in more detail. Last, I included the name of my company which I had inadvertently omitted in the first elevator pitch.